Editing a couple of poems for Open Your Mind – I nearly send this in when I discover the auto spell function has somewhat altered the wrap up of my first stanza…
I see you leaving
Hour by hour
I see the pain in you
an agony that does not endocrinologist
!!! 🙂
Well, it does add a certain element of surprise… reminds me of a gorgeous haiku:
Haiku's are easy
But they don't always make sense
Refrigerator
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Actually I think that's quite apt LOL
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